Songkran Festival
Part1 1. The writer describes well about activities, atmosphere, and feeling, so I enjoy reading the story.
2. I had many memorable activities and great time during the Festival day.
3. Perhaps, writer can add some more about 2 days which were not mentioned because readers might want to read more about those left days.
4. You should have a clearer topic sentence which states that what the story is going to be about such as telling that you are talking about the activities done on the festival day.
5. There are no any grammatical mistakes.
Part2 C=3, O=2, V=3, G=3, S=3
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