Assignment III

How to Get an A in English

It’s really easy to get an A in English if you follow these five steps. First of all, do not miss any class since there are 10 percents for attending. This step is the beginning of all actions and like the first door you have to pass in order to go to the next step. Next, pay full attention in class. You must listen carefully to the teacher. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to ask him/her. Thirdly, do all homework assigned, and send them on time. Just doing that and 45 percents will easily be yours. Then we move to the forth step which is to review lessons at least about 1 month, not overnight before exam. Finally, midterm and final tests are 45 percents, so do them to the best of your abilities and by the rule of thumbs. Indeed, if you follow all above effective steps, an A in English will be yours!

Feedback II

Songkran Festival

Part1 1. The writer describes well about activities, atmosphere, and feeling, so I enjoy reading the story.
2. I had many memorable activities and great time during the Festival day.
3. Perhaps, writer can add some more about 2 days which were not mentioned because readers might want to read more about those left days.
4. You should have a clearer topic sentence which states that what the story is going to be about such as telling that you are talking about the activities done on the festival day.
5. There are no any grammatical mistakes.

Part2 C=3, O=2, V=3, G=3, S=3

Feedback I

My Wonderful Aunt

Part1 1. This paragraph has a pattern of listing-order paragraph. It also has transition signals, so I can read and understand it easily.
2. The most marvelous woman whom I admire most thank to 3 major reasons is my aunt.
3. The writer should add some actions more to show that all his aunt has done for him is not because of duties but love.
4. -You should delete some sentence that does not relate to the main idea of the story. For example, “She has got long black hair, brown eyes, and a slim figure.”
-You should combine 2 sentences that have same pronoun because repeating the same subject does not give the feeling of smooth in reading. For example, “she is very smart and successful. She extremely succeeds in her career.” It would be better if we exchange to, “she is very smart and successful who extremely succeeds in her career.”
5. There are no any grammatical mistakes.

Part2 C=3, O=2, V=3, G=3, S=3

Assignment II

Beaches

There are many reasons why I like beaches in Thailand. First of all, beaches are peaceful since there is not much noise, so I can pay attention to do something like reading books. Next, they are very attractive. I do like its sound of wave and atmosphere when the sun rises and sets. Also, I can do many activities on beaches such as taking a memorable picture with my family and friends, playing banana boats, and taking a sunbath. In addition, the sea food is very delicious, fresh, and inexpensive. It is a kind of food that I like the most. Finally, beaches are also known as romantic places. I hope that someday I will propose a woman to marry me as the sun is setting. In brief, beaches are peaceful, attractive, and romantic. They have a variety of delicious seafood and fun activities, also.

Strengths

Mechanics of materials called “Strength” is a very difficult subject for me. I didn’t pay attention in class, so I didn’t get its concept. I tried to go over it but yet didn’t get it at all. Last Thursday, I tested it. There were 6 sections and I was allowed to take textbooks. When the exam started, I did section 3 first then 4 1 2 consecutively. You might be wondering what about section 5 and 6. Umm I didn’t do them since I have no enough time to do. I’m not sure of any sections. However, I’m not serious about it. In fact, I’m happy that I finish its examination. Although the score were bad, I would not be sad because I did my best, and even if I get 0 point I won’t withdraw it certainly. Fighting ^O^

It’s Gone

Do you remember my new dog named Lucky? It started when I came back from Nakornsawan, I saw my lovely dog Sumlee barking at me showing that he was glad to see me again so I patted his head. Then, I looked for the other dog but didn’t see him so I wondered where he was. I asked my neighbor if they knew where he was, but the answers were no. They told me that they didn’t see him any more since I went to Nakornsawan. I think he is gone because he might think that my family left him T_T.

First Day of 2010

I woke up at 4.00 am for taking a shower. In the morning I presented food to Buddhist priests who came down form the mountain. After that, I had breakfast with KaowMunKai that was famous in Nakornsawan. In the afternoon I went to Kang Kao Yai, but it was crowded so I changed to Bung BorLaPet and had northeast food as a lunch. Next, I came back home. Traffic was relatively jam, so I arrived home at 9.00 pm. In 2010 I wish everyone happiness and success in everything that you wish. Happy New Year 2010 ^^

Last Day of 2009

Traffic was not jam, so I spent only 3 hours for traveling to Nakornsawan. First of all, I visited my grand parents and had lunch together. My grand mother cooked MooPaLow that was very delicious. After that, I went to Kiriwong Temple, a beautiful temple on Daowadung Mountain. We can see some of Nakornsawan in 360๐. In the evening I had sea food as a dinner beside Ping River. When the sun shines, it is like the river glittering. It is such a marvelous place. Next, I went to a temple for praying. At night I played cards and counted down in resort. That was the last day of 2009.